We're up 2 to 0 and I think we are winners
Here comes the ball nothing unusual here
There is number seven but he won't come near
I reach for the ball, I plant and I swing
It flies far from me, isn't that something?
And then I drop, broken and confused
2 seconds and it's all over
Why?
What?
Rage fills me as I clench my teeth
This isn't some sprained ankle
I lay down and I pray for it to be nothing
Knowing it's worse.
I used rhyme in the first part of the poem because it makes it seem more nonchalant, like everything is going great and I don't have a care in the world. There's a meter that isn't super strict which I think also adds to the nonchalantness of the poem. This goes on for 6 lines and then I break the pattern, it doesn't rhyme and doesn't have a meter. This illustrates how everything went to shit when he tackled me. I used the short "Why?" and "What?" to show how I was dazed right after it happened and was really unsure of what to do. The next part is sort of a way to vent and it's basically everything that went through my head as I felt the pain in my knee.
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