Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Modernist


Could
you, around
it move
you if but,
now
it
read
can't
probably you,
should
it way
the go
doesn't it,
see you
normal poem
a like
isn't this
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1 comment:

  1. MaxOctober 13, 2011 at 7:58 AM

    John, first I will start by saying I really like this poem. Secondly I like your immagry and line breaks that make the poem creative and helps tell a story. Great stuff big guy.
    -Max

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